Audit your story & Develop a strategic plan

Make sense of your messy draft and uncover your story’s true potential.

Not sure what’s working—or what’s not—in your current draft? This toolkit helps you step back and assess the big picture. With my guidance, you’ll build an “As Is” outline of your manuscript, pinpoint red, yellow, and green issues, and revise your story map until it aligns with your vision. You’ll walk away with a clear revision plan and renewed momentum.
- ​​Audit your story
- Assess your findings
- Identify what's wrong
- Obtain direct feedback on your assessments from your coach
- Brainstorm solutions with your coach
- Make a strategic plan for what needs to be changed
- Iterate until your plan reflects your story vision*
*Note: Audit Your Story & Develop A Strategic Plan toolkit includes three iterations of the "Next Steps" Outline. Additional iterations are priced separately.

Ongoing Revision Plan

Revise with consistency, expert feedback,
​and a clear path to a pitch-ready manuscript.

Bring your story to the finish line with steady support and twice-monthly deadlines. You’ll submit up to 25 pages every two weeks and receive focused developmental feedback that strengthens your story’s structure, pacing, and character arcs. We’ll tackle problems as they arise and keep moving forward—until your manuscript is submission-ready and solid from start to finish.
-In-line comments
-Summary of strengths and weaknesses, including suggestions for additional improvements
-Actionable next steps
-30-minute coaching call to discuss the feedback, suggestions, and next steps in the revision stage
Revise your story toolkit investment
Audit Your Story & Develop A Strategic Plan
$1,800
Additional "As Is Outline" Iterations
$150
Ongoing Revision Plan
$330/25-page deadline